Can call it a distant vision,
Or could be merely a delusion,
While this head was torn in pain,
And this heart full of strain,
Something won't let you break,
That distant but placid lake,
Whose water so calm,
With the sun to keep it warm,
Yet, the night is still,
Frozen in the chill,
With a breeze waiting to kill,
Could you hold on your nerves,
For the one who deserves?
Does Dark and Deep,
Keeps you from sleep?
All perspectives so hazy,
Your wings go crazy,
Yet, an irresistible drive,
And a will to survive,
And just one lifetime to revive,
Could these be your beacon of hope?
Wonder, if that'd be enough to cope?
Yet, the heart will bleed,
Tis more than just a need,
All the stakes at this battle,
That could be a death rattle,
Or, would it be a bait?
Guess, the answer will have to wait,
Is it best to leave it at fate?
19 comments:
Lovely wrk!
ho ho ho ho....gr8...a new poet in the town...
seriously, nice work...
Nice Work...So when is the next one coming??
Abhimanyu, Gurmeet and Anubhav, Thanks so much guys. I am glad you liked it. :)
it may sound vague, cuz i was tryin to describe an emotion by creating a backdrop.
however everyone will have a different perspective.
hey tulika.thats awesum.didntknw had such agood poet in my class.keep the good work goin.
yes i guess it is the best to leave it @ fate.
Tulika thrs a greAT POET IN U!!!
My my Tulika, Kitna darad bhara hai teri baato main. Are these really your thoughts. Way to go go babes, keep sending me the latest ones. You have a follower
Adi and Pooja, thanks a lot for your generous comments. :):) blush! blush!
awwwh! Komal I am so gonna miss the fun time I had in office with u..keep in touch.mwaah!
Good going, Tulika. But this is serious stuff. Hope everything is fine!
Oh yes sir! I am doing very well...Since I signed into this blogging site so I thought I might as well write something...so i came up with this poem. I don't know if it's making sense. Just kept writing whatever came to my mind.
Awesome piece of work..very well expressed..Keep it up..Waiting for more to come!!
Dark! What prompted this Tulika? Good writing, don't stop.
Arunimma
Oh Ma'am..thanks so much! that's enough inspiration to keep me going...I was going through a friend's blog, which inspired me to start one of my own and share my thoughts...but this is completely random..just for the sake of the blog.
now this is sumfin awesome! keep up the gud wrk kiddo!
Pranky
Thanks Pranks!
see I am really good at rhyming...lol
I always knew the poet... loved it :) you make me so proud.. :*
so do you baby..ur a star..miss u tonnes!
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