Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Pheonix- Rising from Ashes



Can call it a distant vision,
Or could be merely a delusion,

While this head was torn in pain,
And this heart full of strain,

Something won't let you break,
That distant but placid lake,
Whose water so calm,
With the sun to keep it warm,

Yet, the night is still,
Frozen in the chill,
With a breeze waiting to kill,

Could you hold on your nerves,
For the one who deserves?

Does Dark and Deep,
Keeps you from sleep?

All perspectives so hazy,
Your wings go crazy,

Yet, an irresistible drive,
And a will to survive,
And just one lifetime to revive,

Could these be your beacon of hope?
Wonder, if that'd be enough to cope?

Yet, the heart will bleed,
Tis more than just a need,
All the stakes at this battle,
That could be a death rattle,

Or, would it be a bait?
Guess, the answer will have to wait,
Is it best to leave it at fate?

19 comments:

Unknown said...

Lovely wrk!

Anubhav : Soul Sucked... said...

ho ho ho ho....gr8...a new poet in the town...
seriously, nice work...

Gurmeet Singh said...

Nice Work...So when is the next one coming??

Tulika said...

Abhimanyu, Gurmeet and Anubhav, Thanks so much guys. I am glad you liked it. :)

it may sound vague, cuz i was tryin to describe an emotion by creating a backdrop.

however everyone will have a different perspective.

Unknown said...

hey tulika.thats awesum.didntknw had such agood poet in my class.keep the good work goin.

PD said...

yes i guess it is the best to leave it @ fate.
Tulika thrs a greAT POET IN U!!!

Unknown said...

My my Tulika, Kitna darad bhara hai teri baato main. Are these really your thoughts. Way to go go babes, keep sending me the latest ones. You have a follower

Tulika said...

Adi and Pooja, thanks a lot for your generous comments. :):) blush! blush!

Tulika said...

awwwh! Komal I am so gonna miss the fun time I had in office with u..keep in touch.mwaah!

Vikram Johri said...

Good going, Tulika. But this is serious stuff. Hope everything is fine!

Tulika said...

Oh yes sir! I am doing very well...Since I signed into this blogging site so I thought I might as well write something...so i came up with this poem. I don't know if it's making sense. Just kept writing whatever came to my mind.

Mahima said...

Awesome piece of work..very well expressed..Keep it up..Waiting for more to come!!

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Unknown said...

Dark! What prompted this Tulika? Good writing, don't stop.
Arunimma

Tulika said...

Oh Ma'am..thanks so much! that's enough inspiration to keep me going...I was going through a friend's blog, which inspired me to start one of my own and share my thoughts...but this is completely random..just for the sake of the blog.

Enigma said...

now this is sumfin awesome! keep up the gud wrk kiddo!
Pranky

Tulika said...

Thanks Pranks!

see I am really good at rhyming...lol

Unknown said...

I always knew the poet... loved it :) you make me so proud.. :*

Tulika said...

so do you baby..ur a star..miss u tonnes!

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